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Short scholarship letter, please help me refine it! Thank you so much!!!! Hey guys! I just wrote this motivation letter for my scholarship application. I have to keep it this short because of the word limit. Could you guys please help me with this letter, and maybe improve it? Thank you so much! :) As a design student who has experience studying in different cultures and interning in several studios, I have always been passionate about design and would like nothing more than to dedicate myself to it. Therefore, I applied for your program and scholarship for the same reason you want me, to create innovative solutions that truly inspire. This scholarship represents to me more than just encouragement, but a motivation that keeps pushing me to achieve the best that I can. I deeply aware that studying at your school is no easy feat, but I am so ready to take new challenges and willing to get my hands dirty, to create something new and different. I believed that the scholarship can help me carve my design career, and I intend to seize this opportunity wholeheartedly. Thank you for taking the time to evaluate this, and hope you have a great day.

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Short scholarship letter.

Please help me to improve it! Thank you so much!!!!

Hey guys!
I have just written  this motivated letter for my scholarship application. I have to keep it this short because of the word limit.
Could you guys please help me with this letter, and maybe improve it? Thank you so much! :)

As a Design student who has experience studying about  different cultures. Also interning in several studios. I have always been passionate about design.I would like nothing more than to dedicate myself to it. Therefore, I have  applied to be part of  your programme The scholarship would provide the possibility  to create innovative solutions which would  truly inspire.

I think that this scholarship represents  more than just encouragement, but  motivation that will  keep pushing me to achieve the best that I can do. I am deeply aware that studying at your school is no easy feat, but I am so ready to take on new challenges and willing to get my hands dirty, to create something new and different. I believe that the scholarship could help me carve out  my design career, I intend to seize this golden  opportunity wholeheartedly.

Thank you for giving me this opportunity 

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