lucy—My Hometown

My hometown is PingDu in the province of Shandong, China, which is located on the east coast of the Yellow Sea. It is an agricultural city. It is famous for some agricultural products such as watermelon, celery, and grapes. When I was young, I used to go hiking with my parents and went shopping with my friends. Although I don't have much money, I did buy flowers for my mother as a gift. The happiness was very simple. I seldom had some complaints. But when I was young, I suffered some bad things. My mother was hit heavily by my father in black and blue. They divorced eventually when I was in middle school.
Now we have moved to the remote countryside in the rural area since 2017. It is not a rich place. Residents must live by doing agricultural or other jobs. The infrastructure is out of fashion, but most people are plain and kind and the pace of life is slow. Almost every homes can plant some vegetables, so our neighbours often give us some vegetables. They are very nice people. The biggest advantages here, I think, are the beautiful sky and green environment.
My house is a bungalow with a garage which we designed by ourselves. In my house, there are two bedrooms, one living room, one bathroom,  one foyer and one kitchen. The room that I like the most is the foyer. There's the television, chairs, and the dining table. My family like to grow some green plants, and it is full of life. Outside my house, we planted some fruit trees such as grapes, and peach I remember I ate one peach last year. Although it was bitten by an insect, it was delicious.
It's a little pity that the website do not make a mistake when I wrote the article for the first time. Anyway, I love my house.
Thank you, kind people, from all over the world.

lucy—my hometown

My hometown is PingDu in the province of Shandong, of China ,which is located in the east coast of by the Yellow sea (i looked up the map, it is next to the yellow sea right?). It is an agricultural city. It is famous for some agricultural produce such as watermelon, celery and grapes (last item must always insert "and"). When I was young, I always went hiking with my parents and went shopping with my friends. Although I have no I did not have much money , I used to buy a colourful flowers for my mother as a gift. The happiness was very simple.(This part not so clear maybe "Life was simple and happy" ?)  I seldom had some complaints anything to complain about. But when I was young ,I suffered some bad things had some bad experiences . My mother was hit heavily by my father in the until she was black and blue. They divorced finally when I was in the middle school .
Now In 2017,  we moved to the remote countryside in the rural area (because you already said remote countryside, you don't need to repeat rural area again) in 2017 .It is not a rich place (It is not an upmarket area) , residents must live with agricultural or other jobs. The infrastructure is out of fashion dated. But most people are plain simple and kind and the pace of life is slow. Almost every home could can plant some vegetables ,so my neighborhood often give us some vegetables . They are very nice persons people. The biggest advantages the thing I like most I think are is the beautiful sky and a the green environment.

Italki does not allow me to post in one correction so I need to split it into two