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A complain letter I am the tenant from your house and I am sorry to disturb you, but I have something about this house to complain. Actually, there is something wrong with this house's furniture which made me feel a little uncomfortable and as a result of it I decided to write this letter to you. First, the television is in poor condition that I just can not run it to watch my favorite television program "American dream" and as a result of it I usually feel very boring when I got home. Second, the heating system can not work now and as you know it is winter at present and I can not sleep because of that and it made me very sleepy when I was working in the second day. Third, the door bell has some problems and it became more than loud, so I am afraid that other people in the place will be annoyed because the door bell is too noisy. Above all, I wish you can call the repairman to solve these things. Thank you! Looking forward to hearing from you.

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A complaint letter

I am the one of your tenants in your house. (Maybe put the address and room number if you need?) and I am sorry to disturb you, but I have some thing about this house to complain issues with the house.
Actually, there is something wrong with this house's furniture which made me feel a little uncomfortable and as a result of it I decided to write this letter to you.
First, the heating system can not work now is not working. and as you know it is winter at present and I can not sleep because of that and it made me very sleepy when I was working in the second day.
Second, the television is in such poor condition that I just cannot run it to watch my favorite television programs "American dream" and as a result of it I usually feel very boring when I got home.
Third, the door bell has some problems and it became more than is very loud. , so I am afraid that other people in the place will be annoyed because the door bell is too noisy.
Above all, Please help me solve these things. I wish you can call the repairman to solve these things. Thank you!
Looking forward to hearing from you.


Comments:

A good letter with good structure and a great polite ending. Well done!

When contacting your landlord it is important to write a short letter/email, saying what is wrong and asking for help as soon as possible.
I have put your issue with the heating as the first thing as it is the most important and the landlord definitely needs to help with this. 

It is better to write 'can not' as 'cannot'.

Complain (verb), complaint (noun)

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