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My exercise, running I'd be grateful if you could check and correct my sentences. I like doing exercise because it makes me healthy and feel good. Every morning, I stretch soon after getting up. It makes me energetic all the day. In addition to that, I recently started running two or three times a week. I did't like running when I was a elementary school student. However, I found that I felt like comfortable after running at a right pace. The sense of accomplishment that I could run fast or could run for longer time is awesome. I'd like to keep this exercise habit for my health.

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I like doing exercise because it's good for my health and feels good.

        (Say this if you feel good while exercising.)

I like doing exercise because it's good for my health and makes me feel good.

        (Say this if exercising makes you feel good even when you are not exercising.)


Every morning, I stretch soon after getting up.
It makes me feel energetic all the day.
In addition to that, I recently started running two or three times a week.
I didn't like running when I was an elementary school student.
However, I found that I felt like comfortable after running at a the right pace.

        (It is more natural to say "it felt comfortable" than "I felt comfortable", but both are correct.)


The sense of accomplishment that I could at being able to run fast or could run for a longer time is awesome.
I'd like to keep this exercise habit for my health.


Congratulations on running! It is a great activity!

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My exercise, running

I'd be grateful if you could check and correct my sentences.

I like doing exercise because it makes me feel healthy and feel good.
Every morning, I stretch soon after getting up.
It makes me feel energetic all the day.
In addition to that, I recently started running two or three times a week.
I didn't like running when I was an elementary school student.
However, I found that I felt like comfortable after running at a the right pace.
The sense of accomplishment that I could run fast or could run for longer time is awesome. I feel an awesome sense of accomplishment when I run fast or for a longer period of time.
I'd like to keep this exercise habit for my health.
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I like jogging,too. It is true that exercise makes our body healthy. In fact, I also signed up some half marathons and full marathons in the past years. I am not good at speed. Usually, I try to across finishing line before the limited time. I am not English native speaker. I am workingin in learning English as well. I don't think I can correct your writing, but I think maybe I can leave some messages here to support you.

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