Could you please correct and improve this recommendation? Thanks in advance
Amelie is so wonderful! Really easy to be around and was nice to talk to. We connected straight away and I felt like I’d known her for years. Great stories shared and she is super clean and respectable.
As an aeronautical engineer, specialized in computer systems applied to aviation, she has many companies that could hire her. However, she is so involved and committed in the care of the environment, that she is looking to apply her knowledge and skills to this cause.
If you have the opportunity to host or meet Amelie you should take it!
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Could you please correct and improve this recommendation? Thanks in advance
Amelie is such a wonderful person ! Really easy to be around and was nice to talk to. We connected straight away and I felt like I’d known her for years. Great stories were shared and she is super clean and respectable.As an aeronautical engineer, specialized in computer systems applied to aviation, I imagine that she would have(1) has many companies that could hire her. However, she is so involved and committed in the care of the environment, that she is looking to apply her knowledge and skills to this cause.
If you have the opportunity to host or meet Amelie you should take it!
(1) What you wrote is fine BUT like the "subjunctive" you don't know for sure so would have is more appropriate and I used "I imagine" to clearly show you are "speculating".
Muy bien!!!!
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Could you please correct and improve this recommendation? Thanks in advance
Amelie is so wonderful! Really easy to be around and was nice to talk to. We connected straight away and I felt like I’d known her for years. Great stories shared and she is super clean and respectable.As an aeronautical engineer, specializeding in computer systems applied to aviation, she has the knowledge and skills that can benefit many companies that could hire her. However, she is so involved and committed in the care of the environment, that she is looking to apply her knowledge and skills to this cause.
If you have the opportunity to host or meet Amelie you should take it!
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Thanks Aberdeen!
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Here's that additional correction, sorry, I had to copy and paste it... In addition to her mother tongue: French, she speaks fluent English, Spanish and Portuguese. Sometimes she confuses these last two. This makes her conversation exist. Correction: In addition to her mother tongue, French, she speaks fluent English, Spanish, and Portuguese, although sometimes she confuses/mixes up the last two. (Not sure what you meant by the word "exist," sorry!)
*There are a few good ways to translate these sentences, but I tried to keep the wording as close to yours as possible.
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I would like to add this phrase, could you correct it?
In addition to her mother tongue: French, she speaks fluent English, Spanish and Portuguese. Sometimes she confuses these last two. This makes her conversation exist.
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