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The bar charts describes as to the parentage of male and female employees in seven kinds of occupation in 2012.
Overall, although some of them have surprisingly different rates, mostly of job is not that much.
In contrast, Engineering accounted for more 80%, which was the greatest consequence in whole, Education is the lowest 25%.
Science and Business have approximately the same 65%. Art,Law and Medicine were not greater than 60%.
Although the percentage of female worker in Education is the highest as a whole. Apart from Education and Engineering, five charts of female showed under 55% and over 20%.
The case that the percentage of male engaged the largest, female was the lowest. When the percentage of male occupied the maximum, female was the minimum.
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Write down about the uploaded file below. The bar charts describes the percentage of male and female employees in seven kinds of occupations in 2012. Overall some of the occupations have surprisingly different rates, most of the jobs are not that much. In contrast, engineering accounted for 80% of males within the workforce. The greatest consequence in whole, education being the lowest with 25%. Science and business has approximately the same with 65%. Art,law and medicine were not greater than 60%. Although the percentage of female workers within education is the highest overall. Apart from education and engineering, five charts of female workers showed under 55% and over 20%. The case is that the percentage of male engaged within the graph as the highest and females being the lowest. When the percentage of male occupied the maximum, female was the minimum.
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