the World laughs at you or with you?
part.1
Charlie Maupassant woke up in a daze, feeling a little bit desperate and depressed, he brushed his teeth and washed his face as he usually does, cooked himself an oatmeal and egg, ate it all with a fragrant cup of coffee. Nothing impressing, typical and mundane morning of Mr.Maupassant, but the strong feeling of being alone stuck in Charlie's head, and suddenly he started thinking about that day from school, when he had been fooled by everybody, not a single person had cheered him up that day, even his own mother laughed at him....
this was a first part of a long story, that happened to Charlie, but I think I should write it in small pieces, to help my reader understand it, but at the same time not scary him with a long story or smth...
waiting for your reviews :)
p.s. yet again: I am not a writer or smth, I don't even speak english properly, my native language is pretty different from english, so don't judge me hard pls
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part.1
Charlie Maupassant woke up in a daze, feeling a little bit desperate and depressed, (there should be a full stop here) he brushed his teeth and washed his face as he usually does, cooked himself an oatmeal and eggs (or an egg), ate it all along with a fragrant cup of coffee. Nothingimpressing impressive, just a typical and mundane morning of Mr.Maupassant, but the strong feeling of being alone stuck in Charlie's head, and suddenly he started thinking about that day from school, when he had been fooled by everybody, not a single person had cheered him up that day, even his own mother laughed at him....
this was a first part of a long story, that happened to Charlie, but I think I should write it in small pieces, to help my reader understand it, but at the same time not scary him with a long story or smth...
waiting for your reviews :)
p.s. yet again: I am not a writer or smth, I don't even speak english properly, my native language is pretty different from english, so don't judge me hard pls
Charlie Maupassant woke up in a daze, feeling a little bit desperate and depressed, (there should be a full stop here) he brushed his teeth and washed his face as he usually does, cooked himself an oatmeal and eggs (or an egg), ate it all along with a fragrant cup of coffee. Nothing
this was a first part of a long story, that happened to Charlie, but I think I should write it in small pieces, to help my reader understand it, but at the same time not scary him with a long story or smth...
waiting for your reviews :)
p.s. yet again: I am not a writer or smth, I don't even speak english properly, my native language is pretty different from english, so don't judge me hard pls
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