English diary. Day 3
I have no idea what I should talking about today. It was a usual day. After work me and friend of mine watched film 'Clueless' in original with subtitles. It was very difficult because a lot of slang was used and we didn't finish it.
My Birthday is coming soon, but I still haven't invited friends to the party.. My plan is playing games and eating pizza all the evening. I'm nervous a little bit because not all my friends know each other and they might be confuse.
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English diary. Day 3
I have no idea what I should talk about today. It was a normal day. After work I watched the film 'Clueless' in original language with subtitles with a friend. It was very difficult because a lot of slang was used and we didn't finish it.My birthday is coming soon, but I still haven't invited any friends to the party. My plan is to play games and eat pizza all evening. I'm a little nervous because not all my friends know each other and they might be confused.
Hello Karina, a nice piece of writing with a few corrections, mainly to make it more natural.
Best wishes
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I have no idea what I should be talking about today. It was a normal day. After work a friend and I watched the movie 'Clueless' in the original version with subtitles.It was very difficult to understand because a lot of slang was used,and we didn't finish it. My birthday is coming soon,but I still haven't invited friends to the party. My plan is to play games and eat pizza all evening. I'm a little nervous because not all my friends know each other, and they might be a little reserved.
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I have no idea what I should talking about today. It was a usual day. After work my friend and I watched the original film 'Clueless' with subtitles. It was very difficult because a lot of slang was used and we didn't finish it. My Birthday is coming soon, but I still haven't invited friends to the party. My plan is to play games and pizza all the evening. I'm a little bit nervous because not all my friends know each other and they might be confused.
Awesome job! Just a few small corrections
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