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At aquarium I saw bad manner people at aquarium . Deep sea fish area is showed sings of "Camera flush prohibited ", but a family took a photo for deep sea fish using flush. I was sorry for these fish because such fish was weak for the strong light . So I

warned them not to use flush.

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Hi Norio,

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At aquarium

I saw some bad mannered people at the aquarium . The deep sea fish area is showed  had signs sings of  that said "Camera flash prohibited ", but a family took a photo for deep sea fish using a flash anyway. I was sorry for these fish because such fish was are weak for the strong light . So I warned them the family not to use their flash.

The change from them to the family in the last sentence isn't really needed. It's pretty obvious you meant them to be the family not the fish.

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I saw people with bad manners at the aquarium. The deep sea fish area had signs showing "Camera Flash Prohibited," but a family took a photo of the deep sea fish using a flash. I felt sorry for the fish because the light is too bright for them. I warned the family not to use the flash.



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