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Email Hi Lucy: What surprise when I received your email. I would be very pleased of helping you with this subject. Recently, I found an interesting article related to this issue. I think that it would be very useful because there are some important differences between USA movement and a Spanish movement. The first would be that American women, who represent me too movement , are famous models and actress and in Spain they are anonymous victims of some type of crimes related with gender violence. The second Is that the wave of feminism started here in 2015 with a demonstration against male sexist. 337 feminism organizations supported that act. The most revelant was the great amount of young women who participated there. In 2016, there was a state agreement against gender violence and a new demonstration had place in order to get money to budget their political pact. It was a success, they got 200 million. In 2017, two court cases were followed by public opinion, Juana Rivas’ case, who suffered domestic abuse and was sentenced to 5 years in prison for kidnapping her children when she only tried To protect them. “La manada” case was very important too. A 18 years old young woman was raped and robbed by five adults men who recorded all the aggression with their mobile phones. Both cases has fired the mood , asking for an urgent reaction. I hope that my email will be useful for your next article , if you need some extra information , don’t hesitate to ask me. See you soon Nuria

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Hi Lucy: What a surprise when I received your email. I would be very pleased of helping you with this subject. Recently, I found an interesting article related to this issue. I think that it would be very useful because there are some important differences between USA movement and a Spanish movement. The first would be that American women, who represent me too movement , are famous models and actress and in Spain they are anonymous victims of some type of crimes related with gender violence. The second Is that the wave of feminism started here in 2015 with a demonstration against male sexist. 337 feminism organizations supported that act. The most revelant was the great amount of young women who participated there. In 2016, there was a state agreement against gender violence and a new demonstration had place in order to get money to budget their political pact. It was a success, they got 200 million. In 2017, two court cases were followed by public opinion, Juana Rivas’ case, who suffered domestic abuse and was sentenced to 5 years in prison for kidnapping her children when she only tried To protect them. “La manada” case was very important too. A 18 years old young woman was raped and robbed by five adults men who recorded all the aggression with their mobile phones. Both cases has fired the mood , asking for an urgent reaction. I hope that my email will be useful for your next article , if you need some extra information , don’t hesitate to ask me. See you soon Nuria Ps:You did well i found an only mistake at the begging
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Hi Lucy:
What a surprise to receive your email. I would be very pleased to help you with this subject. Recently, I found an interesting article related to this issue.
I think that it would be very useful because there are some important differences between the USA movement and the Spanish movement. The first would be that American women, who represent the #metoo movement are famous models and actresses, and in Spain they are anonymous victims of some type of crimes related with gender violence.
The second Is that the wave of feminism started here in 2015 with a demonstration against male sexism. 337 feminist organizations supported that act. A great amount of young women who participated there.
In 2016, there was a state agreement against gender violence and a new demonstration had taken place in order to get money to fund the pact. It was a success, as they raised €200 million.
In 2017, two court cases were followed by public opinion. The first case was of Juana Rivas’, who suffered domestic abuse and was sentenced to 5 years in prison for kidnapping her children when she only tried to protect them.
The “La manada” case was very important too. An 18 year old young woman was raped and robbed by five adult men who recorded all the aggression with their mobile phones.
Both cases have furthered the cause, with supporters calling for an urgent response.
I hope that my email will be useful for your next article ; if you need some extra information, don’t hesitate to contact me.
See you soon,
Nuria
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I'm not an English native speaker, but isn't it too official for just a message? but if that's a school work it's ok, I guess 🤔

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