A beautiful city (If you can help me correct the errors in this article,then thank you !
I am preparing the IELTS exam and the writing below is for speaking.
I’m going to talk about Xiamen, which is a picturesque city locates in the Fujian. I heard about the Xiamen since I was a young age because my hometown is Quanzhou which is close to Xiamen. For my family, it just needs one hour to get Xiamen. So, my parents go to the Xiamen pretty frequently. Every time when they get back, they share the traveling story with me and then I start to know Xiamen.
Xiamen and its surrounding countryside is known for its scenery and tree-lined beaches. And its most famous tourist attraction is Gulangyu, a former treaty port enclave, is a popular weekend getaway with views of the city and features many Victorian-style buildings. But because it’s popular, it is crowed as well since everyone regards it as the must-see attraction of the Xiamen. I remember vividly that the first time I go to the Xiamen, about ten years ago, one of my closest friends with I went to the Gulangyu to visit. But when we got there, the only thing we can see was people and the street was packed like sardines in the can.
Well, why I think of Xiamen is a beautiful city? As I said before, Xiamen has spectacular view and that is why I love is this city.
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A beautiful city (If you can help me correct the errors in this article,then thank you !
I am preparing the IELTS exam and the writing below is for speaking.I’m going to talk about Xiamen, which is a picturesque city located in the Fujian. I heard about the Xiamen since I was younga young age because my hometown is Quanzhou which is close to Xiamen. For my family, it just takes one hour to get to Xiamen. So, my parents go to the Xiamen pretty frequently. Every time when they get back, they share the traveling story with me a story from their trip with me and then I start to know about Xiamen.
Xiamen and its surrounding countryside are known for their scenery and tree-lined beaches. And its most famous tourist attraction is Gulangyu, a former treaty port enclave, a popular weekend getaway with views of the city which features many Victorian-style buildings. But because it’s popular, it is crowed as well since everyone regards it as the must-see attraction of the Xiamen. I remember vividly that the first time I went to the Xiamen, about ten years ago, one of my closest friends with I went to the Gulangyu to visit I went to visit Gulangyu with one of my closest friends. But when we got there, the only thing we can saw was people and the street was packed like sardines in a can.
Well, why do I think of Xiamen as a beautiful city? As I said before, Xiamen has spectacular views and that is why I love is this city.
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