Embarrassing time
I am so ashamed when I work. Because I have a fear Of swallowing(Phagophobia). So people feel it to be so strange when I have this fear. Sometime, suddenly this fear is appeared. I have no idea to solve it. But I can only pray to God. I have no way to get peace in my heart. But I can only pray to my savior Lord Jesus Christ.
Now I am belonged to Nikon section in Veriserve inc. And I will be belonged to Monotsuku inc. So current trial is so great training for me.
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Embarrassing time
I am so ashamed* when I am at work. Because** I have a fear Of swallowing(Phagophobia). So people feel it to be so strange when I have this fear***. Sometime, suddenly this fear is appeared. I have no idea to solve it. But I can only pray to God. I have no way to get peace in my heart. But I can only pray to my savior Lord Jesus Christ.Now I am now belonged to Nikon section in at Veriserve inc., and I will be belonged to soon be joining Monotsuku inc. So this current trial is so great training very stressful**** for me.
* "Ashamed" might be too strong a word. "Embarrassed" is probably more natural.
** If you use "because" it's better to use it as a conjunction in the same sentence. (たとえば "I'm so embarrassed, because I have a fear . . .")
*** It is more natural to say "People think it's strange that I have this fear."
**** "This current trial . . ." The sentence is not very natural.
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Melisa, Thank you for your comment. I am so encouraged!!
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If they make you feel ashamed, shame on them. All of us dealing with life from different aspects. I know one thing, no one is perfect, sir. Doesn't matter the religion, I will pray for you in my own way. I hope you can find true treatment as soon as possible.
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