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hope someone could correct my note below：
for this moment at least. I physically cannot sleep in .something what stucking with me all day.I'm tossing and turning now.i once thought i can stand beside someone in eternity.
but it's just a huge ridiculous joke so far as today.i don't know why god likes kiding me. i think it's only a monologue by myself.
why do this all？i don't know and don't want to thinking it again.it's rather cold this afternoon that maybe lead me to catch a cold.i feel really not well now.bacause i have a little headache .i don't go to work tomorrow.even So i think i must go sleel now instead considering those comial n meaningless things.I gotta work on that.i trust that everything will be going well.everyonelf.to the love ya'll.say bye for myself.
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notitled
hope someone could correct my note below：At this moment, physically I cannot sleep, something has stuck with me all day. I'm tossing and turning now. I once thought I could stand beside someone for eternity.
It's nothing but a huge ridiculous joke so far today. I don't understand why god likes to joke with me. I think it's only a monologue with myself.
Why do all this? I don't know and don't want to think about it again. It's rather cold this afternoon so I could maybe catch a cold. I don't really feel well now and I have a touch of headache. I will not go to work tomorrow. Even so I think I should go to sleep now instead of pondering about those corny and meaningless things. I have to work on that. I trust that everything will be fine. To everyone with love.
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From this moment at least, I physically cannot sleep with something sticking in my mind all day.I'm tossing and turning around now. I've once thought i could stand beside someone for the eternity. But it's just a huge ridiculous joke. I don't know why god likes kiding me. I think it's only a monologue.
Why do all this? I don't know and don't want to think about it again. It's rather cold this afternoon, and I may catch a cold. I really don't feel well because of the headache. I won't even go to work tomorrow. So I think should go sleep now, instead considering those comial (??) and meaningless thoughts.I should work on that. I trust that everything will be ok. Everybody: I love ya'll. Say bye to myself.
Why do all this? I don't know and don't want to think about it again. It's rather cold this afternoon, and I may catch a cold. I really don't feel well because of the headache. I won't even go to work tomorrow. So I think should go sleep now, instead considering those comial (??) and meaningless thoughts.I should work on that. I trust that everything will be ok. Everybody: I love ya'll. Say bye to myself.
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In this moment, I feel physically unable to sleep.Something has been sticking in my mind all day and I am tossing and turning inside.I once believed I found someone that could stand beside me for eternity.
It's a huge, ridiculous joke now and I don't know why God is kidding me like this. It is only a monologue with myself.
Why do all this? I don't know and don't want to keep thinking about it again...
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