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Could you check my sentences, please ?-28 Could you please check my sentences stated below?

If there are mistakes, please correct them.

1.More research is needed to round out the blue law.

2. It is dangerous to have plastic surgery such as rhinoplasty at puberty.

3. On the stage, a tall woman wore a long lavish sequinned dress.

4. There is plenty of time before his party will have to face the electorate and nemesis.

5. You can count on the anesthetist in this hospital because he's been granted the ultimate accolade for his skill.

6. I'm dubious that he might be an expatriate smuggler.

7. He leaned over to me and said "You're wrong" with a solemn face.

8. The pagans have secluded themselves at a mountain temple.

I really appreciate your help.

Etsuko

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1. There is not sufficient research done as yet to abolish the blue law.

2. Rhinoplasty at puberty is severely dangerous and not recommended.

3. A woman with a long lavish  , sequin dress was on stage.

4. There is still plenty of time before he needs to face the opposition and the voters.

5. You can put your faith in this hospitals anesthesiologist since he is voted top doctor.

6. I am certain that he is a foreign smuggler.

7. He leaned over to me as he said "You're wrong" with a solemn face.

8. The pagans have secluded themselves at the mountain temple.


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Could you please check my sentences stated below?

If there are mistakes, please correct them.

1.More research is needed to bottom out/around the blue law.

2. It is dangerous to have plastic surgery such as rhinoplasty during puberty.

3. On the stage, a tall woman wore a long lavish sequinned dress.

4. There is plenty of time before his party will have to face the electorate and it's nemesis.

5. You can count on the anesthetist in this hospital. He is highly qualified (or) He has a fantastic reputation.

6. I suspect that he might be an expatriate smuggler.

7. He leaned over to me with a solemn face and said "You're wrong".

8. The pagans have hidden themselves away at a mountain temple.

The pagans have secreted themselves away....

The pagans have squirrelled themselves away (colloquial)....

I really appreciate your help.

Etsuko

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