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IELTS #4: Women in the military and police forces
Some people think that the role of women in the military or police forces is very relevant and becoming more significant. Others argue the opposite. Do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
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More women have been involved in the military or police forces since the beginning of the century. As increasing numbers of countries begin to expand the role of women over the last decade, there has been controversial debate among the public whether it is necessary for women to serve in combat conditions.
First of all, genetically women are not as physically strong as men.
The fact is that women have a harder time moving quickly with a great deal of military equipment on their back, which often weigh between 50 and 100 pounds.
For this reason, they may not be able to maintain pace over a long period of time with male soldiers, regardless of how fit they are.
Recent studies also identified that females are not able to adept at handling the increased g-forces in aviation due to their less dense skeletal system.
In addition, there is a concern that women at the frontline are more likely to be at risk of being captured and tortured, and possibly sexually assaulted because of their physical sizes.
Nevertheless, there are advantages to having women in the military and police forces. Some critics claim that they can be used in prominent roles in a variety of major military campaigns.
Historically speaking, it has been said that women in Stalingrad battles provided a significant source of combat power for the Soviet Union.
In recent years, women soldiers have been reported to have given mental and physical assistance to those in need.
According to an article published in the UN report, many female casualties in war appreciated all the help women soldiers gave them.
In conclusion, despite the disadvantages, it can be beneficial to have female soldiers and police officers if they are given less dangerous duties.
In this way, both men and women would equally share the responsibility for protecting the country.
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