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Please, correct me! Hello! My name is Viviane. I have 30 years old and I was born in the city of Belo Horizonte, state of Minas Gerais. I study at UNICESUMAR's University, and I am coursing the first year of Executive Secretariat . I have about 15 years of professional experience like Secretary and currently I am looking for a new job in this area. I am married and I have not children.

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Please, correct me!

Hello!
My name is Viviane. I am 30 years old and I was born in the city of Belo Horizonte in the state of Minas Gerais.
I study at UNICESUMAR University, and I am a first year student studying to be an Executive Secretary . I have about 15 years of professional experience as a secretary and currently I am looking for a new job in this area.
I am married and I don't have any children.

Hello Viviane,

A nice introduction with just a few corrections to make it more natural

Best wishes

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Hello!
My name is Viviane. I have am 30 years old and I was born in the city of Belo Horizonte, state of Minas Gerais.
I study at UNICESUMAR's University, and I am coursing the first year of Executive Secretariat . I have about 15 years of professional experience like as a Secretary and currently I am looking for a new job in this area.
I am married and I do not have children.

Keep it up, Viviane!
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Please, correct me!

Hello!
My name is Viviane. I have am 30 years old and I was born in the city of Belo Horizonte, in the state of Minas Gerais.
I study at UNICESUMAR's University, and I am coursing in the first year of the Executive Secretary program. I have about 15 years of professional experience like as a secretary and currently I am looking for a new job in this area.
I am married and I have not no children.


Nice work, Viviane.

I met two people from Minas Gerais last month.  They have been studying English here in San Diego for about eight months.

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Please, correct me!

Hello!
My name is Viviane. I am 30 years old and I was born in the city of Belo Horizonte, state of Minas Gerais.
I study Executive Secretariat  at UNICESUMAR's University, and I am coursing the first year of Executive Secretariat . I have about 15 years of professional experience like   as a secretary and currently I am currently looking for a new job in this area.
I am married and I do not have not children.
1

Please, correct me!

Hello!
My name is Viviane. I am have 30 years old and I was born in the city of Belo Horizonte, state of Minas Gerais.
I study at UNICESUMAR's University, and I am coursing the first year of Executive Secretariat . I have about 15 years of professional experience like as Secretary and currently I am looking for a new job in this area.
I am married and I have not children.

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