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Success You might want to become a successful person as you are reading this blog. If so or even if not, I would like you to think about a quote which impressed me. In this blog, I’m going to tell you about the quote and my opinion about it and success. I hope you will be impressed on the quote either.

“Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm” by Winston Churchill

Actually, I completely agree with this quote, because you might find it difficult and fail to do it whenever you start something new .

Especially, if you don’t have any knowledge about new tasks, you might have huge difficulty. However, you can be used to it unless you will give up . That’s why You should push on and toughen up to get used to it even if you have loads of problems and difficulty. If you do so, your effort leads up to your success, I believe. When I was playing softball in my childhood, I was a pitcher . But I couldn’t efficiently throw a softball as a pitcher early days . Whenever I went to the game, I was annoying the team, but I didn’t give up being a good pitcher because I wanted to win the game. And I continued my effort to win the game. Thanks to my effort, I could become a good pitcher that we won a tournament in our town.

On the other hand, I think we might have many things in our lives which couldn’t complete without success. It is not only me to feel difficulty in keeping things, I suppose. And also Some feel difficulty in starting new things or quitting things you are doing to start new things. Therefore it is quite difficult for us to start something new and complete it with success. Then, what should we do to be successful

? I’m going to give you one advise about successfulness. That is pretty simple ,but it is enormously important. It is just to remember what you want to be or want to keep doing and never give up. For example, just write down your future achievement and watch it more than 3 times every day, like morning ,noon and night.

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Success

You might want to become a successful person and that is why as you are reading this blog. If so or even if not, I would like you to think about a quote which impressed me. In this blog, I’m going to tell you about the quote and my opinion about it and about success. I hope you will be impressed on by the quote as well. I was..

“Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm” by Winston Churchill

Actually, I completely agree with this quote because you might find it difficult and fail to do something whenever you start something new .

Especially, if you don’t have any knowledge about these new tasks, you might have huge difficulty.  However, you can be get used to it if unless you will don't give up . That’s why you should push on and toughen up to and get used to it,  even if you have loads of problems and difficulties.  If you do so, your effort will lead up to your success, I believe.  For example, when I was playing softball in my childhood, I was a pitcher . But I couldn’t efficiently throw a softball as a pitcher in the  early days . Whenever I went to a game, I was annoyed the team, but I didn’t give up being a good pitcher because I wanted to win a game. And  ("and" and "but" are conjunctions and join words together but never start a sentence.) I continued with my efforts to win the a game. Thanks to my effort, I could become  became  a good pitcher that and we won a tournament in our town.

On the other hand, I think we might have many things in our lives which we couldn’t  cannot complete without successfully.  It is not only me that has difficulty  in keeping things continuing, I suppose.  And also Some people feel  have difficulty in starting new things or in quitting things you are doing to start new things.  you started. Therefore, it is quite difficult for us to start something new and complete it with success. Then, What should we do to be successful?

I’m going to give you one piece of advice about successfulness. That It is pretty simple but it is enormously important. It is just to remember what you want to be or want to keep doing do and never give up.  For example,  just write down your future achievements and watch look at them more than  at least 3 times every day  like  at morning, noon and night.

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Thank you so much. im sorry for being late to say thank you.
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Well done Jumpei. I just made a few corrections to improve the comprehension of the blog. Most of the other changes were using the correct verb tense. This is often a problem when you are learning english. However, I must say it was overall well written and you explained yourself ver well. Keep up the good work!

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