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IT technologies are embedded in our daily life every day and this process is accelerating more and more. Nowadays, it is arduous to imagine our life without smartphones, wearable devices and the internet. Each sphere includes IT in a different power. The education the most traditional area that has been influenced a little. In my imagination that is a temporary situation and soon education is to change. The first thing that will be embedded is online education, all students who older than 13 years will have a split course, one half at school and another part at home online. After some time people will reject to use a paper because it depletes our wood resources and pollutes the atmosphere. Paper and pen will give place to stylus and screen of the device. All presentations and tests will store in clouds where a teacher can get access to them with ease. Machine learning will think of homework for students and change them on the way when students won't be able to cheat. IT will change our perception about an education soon and from my point of view, it's great.
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Help me:)
Can you give me any advice on how I can improve this text? All your advice is valuable to me. Thank you!IT technologies are embedded in our daily life every day and this process is accelerating. Nowadays, it is difficult to imagine our life without smartphones, devices and the internet. Each sphere includes IT in a different power. However education the most traditional area, has been influenced little. I am sure this is a temporary situation and soon education will change. The first thing that will be embedded is online education, all students older than 13 year,s will have a split course, one half at school and another part at home online. After some time people will reject the use of paper, because it depletes our wood resources and pollutes the atmosphere. Paper and pen will be replaced by screens and devices. All presentations and tests will be stored in clouds where a teacher can get access to them with ease. Machine learning will create homework for students as such students won't be able to cheat. IT will change our perception about education and from my point of view, it's great.
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I have changed your original script I do hope it keeps the meaning you required. Good luck. Louise.
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