Birthday
Today is my birthday and I feel somethings about that. when I was 16 years old I image many things about my life in this age but everything is unpredictable.
I feel bessed cause I'm alive with health and love of my family.
Every day is an opportunity to become in better people.
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My Birthday!
Today is my birthday and I have many different feelings somethings about that. When I was 16 sixteen years old, I image imagined so many things about my life in this at that age, but everything is unpredictable.I feel bessed blessed because I'm alive with good health and the love of my family.
I realize, every day is an opportunity to become in a better person people.
Or I know, every day is an opportunity to become in a better person people.
Happy Birthday Andrea! 🥳
You’re an Aquarius like me. Best to you.
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Birthday
Today is my birthday and I feel some things about that. When I was 16 years old I imagined many things about my life at this age, but everything is unpredictable.I feel blessed because I'm alive with health and the love of my family.
Every day is an opportunity to become a better person.
Happy birthday Andrea!
Just a few minor corrections here. Almost always it is correct to put a comma before "but". Also, even though many native speakers with say "cause" instead of "because", it's not technically correct. In writing, you should write "because". Bien hecho!
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