Talking about a handsome person (Please help me correct it!)
I would like to talk about one of my university roommates called Zhen.
When I first met him, it was on the first day at my university.
My first impression of him was that he is a handsome man, medium height, having a tanned skin, thick eyebrows and big eyes, wearing a pair of black-framed eyeglasses.
He is good at sports, especially running. because he is in good shape with a bubble butt, he gets a
nickname called "Mr. Booty".
I think he is handsome because he has not only good looks but also a sense of humour and abilities in studying and working, for example, he is really good at presentation, which always shows his confidence and humour.
You know, a capable person is always handsome.
We have always been good friends . And we were still roommates after graduation when we both worked in HZ for a while.
Now when I go to HZ for hanging out, I always call him to have a good time together.
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Talking about a handsome person (Please help me correct it!)
I would like to talk about one of my university roommates named Zhen.When I first met him, it was on the first day at my university.
My first impression of him was that he was a handsome boy. He had light(?) skin, thick eyebrows, and big eyes.
He was medium height, but good at running because he had a bubble butt. One of his nicknames was Mr. booty.
I think he is handsome because he not only has good looks, but also a sense of humor, good at his studies, and a good worker.
You know, a capable person is always handsome.
We have always been good friends, and we were still roommates after graduation when we both worked in HZ for a while.
Now when I go to HZ for hanging out, I always call him to have a good time together.
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Talking about a handsome person (Please help me correct it!)
I would like to talk about one of my university roommates called Zhen.When I first met him, it was on the first day in my university.
My first impression of him was that he was a handsome man, having a wheat skin, thick eyebrows and big eyes.
He was medium height and good at running, because he's got a bubble butt. One of his nicknames is "Mr. Booty."
I think he is handsome because he has not only good looks but also a sense of humour and abilities in studying and working.
You know, a capable person is always handsome.
We are still roommates and good friends after graduation and both worked in HZ for a while.
Now when I go to HZ to hang out, I always call him so we can to have a good time together. (Word order)
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