Paper books or e-books?
As we all know, books, as the traditional container to store knowledge, already have been replaced by the internet. From my perspective, the pros outweigh the cons.
There is no doubt that, when we are studying, paper books must be a better choice for us. It is much more convenient for us to take notes while reading. Besides, compared to read e-books, it is more comfortable for our eyes to read paper books. If we continue reading on electronic devices for hours, it will do harm to our eyes and creates the need for stronger glasses. To sum up, paper books are good at both taking notes and our eyes health.
However, in most cases, paper books are too heavy to take out. By contrast, no matter how many books we have to read, what we only have to carry is an electronic device, such as a mobile phone, a tablet, and so forth. It is a much more portable and convenient way for us. Also, storing knowledge in the internet reduces the demand for paper whose raw material is wood. In the long run, fewer forests will be cut down to make papers. Therefore, it is an environmentally friendly choice. Besides, recently, more and more intelligence electronic books have been produced. As the rapid development of science and technology, some advanced devices have been equipped with a function of taking notes while reading. Advanced technology improves our reading experience of e-books. Taking notes conveniently won't be the exclusive advantage of paper books any more. In other words, compared to paper books, e-books are much more portable and environmentally friendly. And technology can make up its disadvantage on taking notes.
To sum up, I admit that paper book is better at both taking notes and our eyes health, however, I believe that the future lies in e-books.
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Paper books or e-books?
As we all know, paper books are the traditional container to store knowledge, and have been somewhat replaced by the internet. From my perspective, the pros outweigh the cons.There is no doubt that, when we are studying, paper books must be a better choice for us. It is much more convenient for us to take notes while reading. It is more comfortable for our eyes to read paper books compared to reading e-books . If we continue reading electronic devices for hours, it will do harm to our eyes and will create the need for stronger glasses. To sum up (choose something else for this phrase because you want to use it at the end, also "to sum up" is a finishing line being used prematurely because you still have the counter argument in the next paragraph) If it were my paper, i would rearrange the entire sentence to "Note taking and eye site health are the two most beneficial factors about traditional paper books" or something to that effect , paper books are good at both taking notes and our eyes health.
However, in most cases, paper books can be heavy to carry around. By contrast, no matter how many books we have to read, what we only have to carry is an electronic device, such as a mobile phone, a tablet, and so forth. These devices are much more portable and convenient for us to carry. Also, storing knowledge in the internet reduces the demand for paper whose raw material is wood. In the long run, fewer forests will be cut down to make paper. Therefore, it is an environmentally friendly choice. More and more intelligent electronic books are being produced every day. Due to the rapid development of science and technology, some advanced devices have been equipped with a function of taking notes while reading improving our experience of e-books. Taking notes won't be the exclusive advantage of paper books any more. In other words, compared to paper books, e-books are much more portable and environmentally friendly. I believe technology can make up its disadvantage on taking notes.
To sum up, I admit that paper book is better at both taking notes and our eyes health, however, I believe that the future lies in e-books.
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Paper Books or E-books?
As we all know, books, as the traditional container (vessel) to store knowledge, already have been replaced by the internet. From my perspective, the pros outweigh the cons.There is no doubt that, when we are studying, paper books must be a better choice for us. It is much more convenient for us to take notes whilst reading. Besides, compared to reading e-books, it is more comfortable for our eyes to read paper books. If we continue reading on from electronic devices for hours, it they (devices is plural so we need a plural pronoun.)will do harm to our eyes and create the need for stronger glasses. To sum up, paper books are good at both taking notes and to protecting our eyes health. (or protect our eyesight).
However, in most cases, paper books are too heavy to carry around with us. By contrast, no matter how many books we have to read, what we only have to carry one electronic device, such as a mobile phone, a tablet, or so forth. It is much more portable and a more convenient way for us. Also, storing knowledge in on the internet reduces the demand for paper whose raw material is wood. In the long run, ideally fewer forests will be cut down to make paper. Therefore, it is an environmentally friendly choice. Besides, recently, more and more intelligence intelligent electronic books have been produced. As the rapid development of science and technology rapidly develop, some advanced devices have been equipped with a function of for (or you could say "enabling us to take notes") taking notes whilst reading. Advanced technology improves our reading experience with e-books. Taking notes conveniently won't be the exclusive advantage of paper books any more. In other words, compared to paper books, e-books are much more portable and environmentally friendly. And( Here "and" and "but" are conjunctions and they connect words but you cannot start a sentence with them.) Technology now can make up its disadvantage on by allowing us to take notes.
In summing up: I admit that paper books are better at both taking notes and protecting our eyes' health. However, I believe that the future lies in e-books.
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This was well written. I liked your use of complex adjectives such as "exclusive" and "rapid". I just refined a few phrases for you and changed a few prepositions which are always hard, even sometimes for a native speaker, to know which is the correct one to use in a phrase.
Keep up the good work!
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