JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Feb.19th
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Feb.19th
I've got the checkup results which I passed the other day. I was thinking that I was in really good health as usual until getting this, but actually it was wrong, sadly. I was in not good health. To tell you the truth, I could't see this results without surprising. According to this, I need to cut down amounts of cholesterol, I mean that my level of cholesterol is really high, comparing to every other person. I heard of that then, I was really surprised since I thought that I cared of foods I ate everyday very much, that' why I did't even imagine this would happen to my body. Okay, but I have no choice now, I need to care of my way to eat kinds of food, It's like I have lots of salad or have not meats and tempura. This way is like really painful for me because these foods is really favorite things for me, as soon as possible, I wanted to eat those everyday. Yes, my way of this started just today. Give it time, good results come to me someday, I guess.
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I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Feb.19th I got the checkup results from the other day. I thought that I was in really good health, until I got the results, but, said, I was wrong. I am not healthy. I was very surprised by these results.
According to the test results, I need to lower my cholesterol levels. When I realized that my cholesterol level is higher than most other people, I was really surprised since I thought that I ate low-cholesterol foods everyday. Now I need to eat lots of salad, instead of meats and tempura. This will be really painful for me because I really like these foods. I started just today, but in time, my test results should improve.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Feb.19th(writing about the checkup results) I got the checkup results form the other day. I thought that I was in really good health, until I got the results, but, said, I was seeing, I am not healthy.. I was very surprised by these results. According to the test results, I need to lower my cholesterol levels. When I realized that my cholesterol level is higher than most other people, I was really surprised sine I thought ate low-cholesterol foods everyday. Now I need to eat lots of salad, instead of meats and tempura. This will be really painful for me because I really like these foods. I started just today, but in time, mutest results should improve.
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