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Hello, dear Tanya!
Great to hear from you! How are things? Did you find a job you like?
I want to write you about my job. I work in Sberbank a bank clerk. I work indoors and every day use a computer. I work nine to six o'clock. My duties are to advise, issue loans and write reports.
It's very demanding, tiring and stressful job. However, it's boring desk work, but on the other hand it's rewarding job. I don't get paid a lot and i need to be polite, patient and calm.
I hope you were interested to know about my work. That's all for now! Write back soon!
Your friend Gilyana.
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Hello, dear Tanya!Great to hear from you! How are things? Did you find a job you like?
I want to write to you about my job. I work in Sberbank as a bank clerk. I work indoors and I use a computer every day. I work from nine to six o'clock. My duties are to advise, resolve loan issues and write reports.
It's a very demanding, tiring and stressful job, not to mention a boring desk work. But, on the other hand, it's rewarding. I don't get paid a lot, but I need to be polite, patient and calm.
I hope you were interested to know about my work. That's all for now! Write back soon!
Your friend Gilyana.
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Nice work, Gilyana!
In light blue, I wrote my suggestion: if you're listing negative qualities about your job, you can link them all in a sentence. Demanding, tiring, stressful, boring. They all can be categorized as negative. Then, you wanna contrast them with the positive aspect: it's rewarding. However, it's just my opinion.
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