Hobbies
Travel to the USA
Traveling is one of my favorite hobbies. I love visiting friends and family, seeing historical sites, and experiencing new cultures. I would like to travel to the US to see the country with my own eyes. As I plan to study in the USA, I would like to get some experience beforehand.
What to do during my trip to the USA
I would like to see the university campus and meet some students. I would like to get to know their experiences and everyday life. Moreover I would like to improve my English and buy some books on American culture. I want to eat a real hamburger and explore the food culture of the US.
Interest (nature)
I love nature. I often walk in the nearby Sanglim park in all seasons. I like visiting cities, but I am very happy to stay in the countryside. My favorite seasons are fall and spring, because they are very colorful and full of change. Flowers are blooming in spring and the leaves change its colors in fall.
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I would like to see the university campus and meet some students. I
would like to get to know their experiences and everyday life. Moreover, I would like to improve my English and buy some books on American culture. I want to eat a real hamburger and explore American food culture of the US.
Interest (nature)
I
love nature. I often walk in the nearby Sanglim park in all seasons. I
like visiting cities, but I am very happy to stay in the countryside. My
favorite seasons are fall and spring, because they are very colorful
and full of change. Flowers are blooming in spring and the leaves change its their colors in fall.
Flowers bloom in the spring: the present simple needs to be used for this sentence because you are mentioning a generality of nature. The present continuous could be used if you were mentioning something you were experiencing at the moment for example: its spring (now) and the flowers are blooming.
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Hobbies
Travel to the USATraveling is one of my favorite hobbies. I love visiting friends and family, seeing historical sites, and experiencing new cultures. I would like to travel to the US to see the country with my own eyes. As I plan to study in the USA, I would like to get some experience beforehand.
What to do during my trip to the USA
I would like to see the university campus and meet some students. I would like to get to know their experiences and everyday life. Moreover I would like to improve my English and buy some books on American culture. I want to eat a real hamburger and explore the food culture of the US.
Interest (nature)
I love nature. I often walk in the nearby Sanglim park in all seasons. I like visiting cities, but I am very happy to stay in the countryside. My favorite seasons are fall and spring, because they are very colorful and full of change. Flowers are blooming in spring and the leaves change its their colors in fall.
[Very natural sounding, Alex -- just one small correction to do with singular vs plural]
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Thanks for your suggestions. Will keep them in mind ;)
So you're back after a long time.
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You should try Chicken Fried Steak - it’s a Classic American meal that gets overlooked a lot :) Super tasty!
Also, I recommend avoiding Los Angeles, as it is not a very nice city. Central and Northern California are wonderful though. Santa Barbara, San Luis Obispo, Monterey, and Santa Cruz are gorgeous places to visit.
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