Sloths I love Sloths. Maybe I love them the best of other animals. They have small eyes, small nouse, and a mouth that seems to smile and are so cute and also beautiful. I have seen wild sloths once.

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Sloths I love Sloths. Maybe I love them the best of other animals. They have small eyes, small nouse, and a mouth that seems to smile and are so cute and also beautiful. I have seen wild sloths once. I saw them in Costa Rica. I could see them as I moved to other place on bus. I was moved at that first moment as I could see them that I had wanted to see for a long time. They move very slowly and this movement is also their charm. I'd like to see them again someday.

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Sloths

I love Sloths. Maybe I love them the best most of any other animal. They have small eyes, small nose and a mouth that seems to smile at you. and I think they are so cute and also so beautiful.

I have seen wild sloths once in my lifetime. I saw It was them in Costa Rica. I could see saw them when I was on a bus going to another place .on bus. I was so moved at that first moment, as because I had finally seen my favourite animal I could see them that I had that I could hardly contain myself (I think you need to explain what happened when you were so moved. That is why I have added "that I could hardly contain myself" ) and I had wanted to see them for such a long time.

Sloths move very, very slowly and this seemingly impeded movement is also part of their charm.

It is my goal to I'd like to see them again someday.

Sloths

I love Sloths. Maybe I love them the best of better than any other animals. They have small eyes, a small nouse nose, and a mouth that seems to smile and are so cute and also beautiful.

I have seen wild sloths once. I saw them in Costa Rica. I could see them as I moved to other place traveled on a bus. I was moved at that the first moment as I could see I saw them these animals that I had wanted to see for a long time.

They move very slowly and this movement is also their charm.

I'd like to see them again someday.

[you could also say: Maybe I love them the best of all animals.]

You are so lucky you saw them in the wild! I would love to see that.

Deborah Again thank you so much for correcting me. English is very profound.:)

Breno I think so too.:) I love them.

Yes. I enjoyed your story about sloths. I just added a few phrases to explain your feelings and when you were talking about their slow movements I added "seemingly impeded" to describe their slow movements. I hope this helps you.

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