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Going back to my home town I'm taking a train with my wife to visit my folks. Although we wanted to take a train which departures earlier, we slept too much and were late! It takes three hours to get there. I'm boring.

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Going Back to My Hometown

I'm taking a train with my wife to visit my folks. Although we wanted to take (1) an earlier train which departures earlier, we (2) overslept slept too much and (3) missed the train were late!

It takes three hours to get there. I'm (4) bored boring.

Hi Masa,

Just some suggestions for your writing: 

(1), (2), (3) and (4) are stylistic changes to make your writing more natural. (4) is a grammatical error. 

(1) If you use "an earlier train", the reader will understand that you are referring to a train which has departed earlier. Similarly, you can use an expression such as "a later flight" to refer to a flight which will depart later than your original flight. 

(2) I presume you meant that you woke up and was surprised to find that you have not woken up at a pre-arranged time. We can use "overslept" to express this meaning. 

(3) You not only woke up late, but you also "missed the train". 

(4) There are some pairs of adjectives which describe emotions. An example of such a pair is "bored" and "boring".

We use "boring" to refer to something that is not mentally stimulating and leaves us feeling dull. (e.g. It was really a boring lecture.)

We use "bored" to refer to our mental state of being under-stimulated. (e.g. It was really a boring lecture and we were all bored to tears.)

Something that is "boring" (event) makes us feel "bored" (feeling). Similarly, something "exciting" makes us "excited"; something "interesting" makes us "interested". 

*When you say that you are "boring", you mean that you have a personality that does not stimulate interest in others. 

I hope this helps. 

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Going back to my home town

I'm taking a train with my wife to visit my folks. Although we wanted to take an earlier train, we overslept and were late!

It takes three hours to get there. I'm bored.

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