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My important appliances I am going to leave for a new house, I need a plan to buy something. My clothes need be ironed frequently, so I will buy a clothes iron. I live in a tropical country due to a fridge is need to keep food fresh. I usually go to the gym, so I need a scale to check in my weight everyday. After taking a bath, my hair gets wet; It makes me annoyed; so I need a hair dryer. Fruit-juice is wonderful, I need a blender.It's not easy to clear inside the air conditioner so I need buy a stepladder.I sometimes have visitors who come my house, so I need a electric kettle to boil water quickly. The contaminated water is very harmful, so I need a water purifier. Finally, I need a stove to cook everyday.

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My important appliances

I am going to leave for a new house, so I need a plan to buy something. My clothes need be ironed frequently, so I will buy a clothes iron.

I live in a tropical country due to so a fridge is needed to keep food fresh. -> Due to living in a tropical country, I need a fridge to keep food fresh.

I usually go to the gym, so I need a scale to check in my weight every day. After taking a bath, my hair gets wet; It makes me annoyed it's annoying, so I need a hair dryer. Fruit-juice is wonderful, I need a blender.It's not easy to clear inside the air conditioner so I need buy a stepladder.I sometimes have visitors who come to my house, so I need a an electric kettle to boil water quickly. The contaminated water is very harmful, so I need a water purifier. Finally, I need a stove to cook everyday.

I really liked this story about appliances! :) There were only a few important mistakes, and I marked them in yellow. The blue text is for recommendations. In the third sentence, I rearranged the words so that it would sound more natural. Let me know if you want more explanation about any of them!

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My important appliances

I am going to move to a new house, so I need a plan to buy some things. My clothes need be ironed frequently, so I will buy a clothes iron. I live in a tropical country, so a fridge is needed to keep food fresh. I usually go to the gym, so I need a scale to check my weight everyday. After taking a bath, my hair gets wet; It makes me annoyed, so I need a hair dryer. Fruit-juice is wonderful, so I need a blender. It's not easy to clean the inside of the air conditioner, so I need to buy a stepladder. I sometimes have visitors who come my house, so I need an electric kettle to boil water quickly. Contaminated water is very harmful, so I need a water purifier. Finally, I need a stove to cook every day.

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