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Bridget Jones's Diary (part 1). Please correct my writing))) Bridget Jones's Diary (part 2). Please correct my writing))) The first day of New Year had been abominable. Bridget took the wrong road on the way to the Alconburys' so she got lost and arrived very late. Geoffrey Alconbury met Bridget wondering about her love—life, he asked Bridget if she still hadn't got a boyfriend. Then Geoffrey added if Bridget didn't hurry up and got married soon, she would be too old to have children. Next Una Alconbury offered Bridget to meet Mark Darcy. Una said that he was rich and divorced. Mark was standing with his back to them. He was tall and was looking at the books on the bookshelves. When Mark turned round Bridget saw that he was wearing a jumper with a pattern of yellow and blue diamonds on the front. It was awful. For a moment neither of them spoke. And some minute later Bridget started talking very quickly and couldn't stop. Mark Darcy was looking at her with a look of horror on his face. He told Bridget that maybe she should get something to eat and he went away immediately. Everyone was staring at Bridget and she knew they were thinking that's why she wasn't married, she talked too much and was very unattractive to men.

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The first day of New Year has been abominable. Bridget took the wrong road on the to the Alconburys' so she got lost and arrived very late. Geoffrey Alconbury met Bridget wondering about her love life, he asked Bridget if she still doesn't have a boyfriend. Then Geoffrey added that if Bridget doesn't hurry up and get married soon, she will be too old to have children. 

Next Una Alconbury offered Bridget to meet Mark Darcy. Una said that he was rich and divorced.
Mark was standing with his back turned toward them. He was tall and was looking at the books on the bookshelves. When Mark turned around, Bridget saw that he was wearing a jumper with a pattern of yellow and blue diamonds on the front. It was awful.
For a moment neither of them spoke. And some time later Bridget started talking very quickly and couldn't stop. Mark Darcy was looking at her with a look of horror on his face. He told Bridget that maybe she should get something to eat and he went away immediately.
Everyone was staring at Bridget and she knew they were thinking that's why she wasn't married, she talked too much and was very unattractive to men.
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Bridget Jones's Diary (part 1). Please correct my writing)))

Bridget Jones's Diary (part 2). Please correct my writing)))

The first day of New Year had been abominable. Bridget took the wrong road on the way to the Alconburys' so she got lost and arrived very late. Geoffrey Alconbury met Bridget wondering about her love—life, he asked Bridget if she was still without  hadn't got a boyfriend. Then Geoffrey added that if Bridget didn't hurry up and got get married soon, she would be too old to have children.
Next Una Alconbury offered Bridget to introduce meet Bridget to Mark Darcy. Una said that he was rich and divorced.
Mark was standing with his back to them. He was tall and was looking at the books on the bookshelves. When Mark turned around, Bridget saw that he was wearing a jumper with a pattern of yellow and blue diamonds on the front. It was awful.
For a moment neither of them spoke. And  Some minute later Bridget started talking very quickly and couldn't stop. Mark Darcy was looking at her with a look of horror on his face. He told Bridget that maybe she should get something to eat and he went away immediately.
Everyone was staring at Bridget and she knew they were thinking that's why she wasn't married, she talked too much and was very unattractive to men.

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