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Do you agree that modern domestic appliances have improved the quality of our lives? Some people believe that modern domestic appliances have improved the quality of our lives whilst others are the opinion that nowadays people are more lazy as a consequence of house technology. In this essay I will discuss both points of view consiedering all the options as well as give my opinion. Lets us start by considering the effects of technology on household chores. It is widely believed that science is here to improve our lives, in fact, is the main reason to apply in ours houses. We can find many cases like automatic dishwasher, modern laundries...Perhaps we should also point out the fact that it is possible to do several domestic activities at the same time. However, they also have some disadvantages like difficulties and expensives reparations. On the other hand, not only we can do better the activities but also we save time for other kind of occupations. One should, however, not forget that almost everyone has a busy lifestyle so it is a good point to save time. Nevertheless, expert suggest point out that our extra time we do not usually spend in profitable pastimes. Thirdly, most men and women be of the opinion that modern domestic appliances have a programated time life. It is especially interesting to see how they break down in a few years, in fact, is intimately related with modern tecnology. So it is up to everybody to decide whether to buy a new fantastic and expensive domestic appliances without insurance or not. From these arguments one might conclude that technology arrived in our lives to stand by us, nonetheless, it is your choose to use smartly

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Do you agree that modern domestic appliances have improved the quality of our lives?

Some people believe that modern domestic appliances have improved the quality of our lives whilst others are of the opinion that nowadays people are more lazy as a consequence of household technology. In this essay I will discuss both points of view considering all the options as well as give my opinion.

Let's us start by considering the effects of technology on household chores. It is widely believed that science is here to improve our lives, in fact, it is the main reason to have appliances in our houses. We can find many examples of appliances like automatic dishwashers, washing machines...Perhaps we should also point out the fact that it is possible to do several domestic activities at the same time. However,  there are also have some disadvantages.For example, appliances can break down and repairs can be expensive.  


On the other hand, not only can we can do household chores better with appliances but we can also save time for other kinds of activities. One should, however, not forget that almost everyone has a busy lifestyle so it is a helpful to save time. Nevertheless, experts suggest that point out that we usually do not spend our extra time we do not usually spend in on profitable pastimes.

Thirdly, most men and women are be of the opinion that modern domestic appliances have a planned obsolescence programated time life. It is especially interesting to see how they break down after a few years, in fact, this is a problem that is intimately related to modern technology. So it is up to everybody to decide whether to buy a new fantastic and expensive domestic appliances without insurance or not.

From these arguments one might conclude that technology arrived in our lives to stand by us, nonetheless, it is your choose to use smartly [I don't understand this sentence. Do you mean: technology arrived in our lives to help us, nevertheless, it is up to you to choose how you will use modern technology.]


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