Day 9 (30 day Challenge) This is the ninth day of the Challenge. I really want to improve my English writing skills, so I created this challenge for myself. Today is the ninth day I writed on italki.

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Day 9 (30 day Challenge) This is the ninth day of the Challenge. I really want to improve my English writing skills, so I created this challenge for myself. Today is the ninth day I writed on italki. Thank you for all who corrected my previous notes! You helped me a lot. I think I started to see my progress, also I started to notice my mistakes. All of these I reached by 1/3 of the way of my writing challenge. But there is a problem. I have no idea what I should write in my next notes :) I wrote about my day, learning English, this challenge and some mini articles for profound thinkers XD Anyway, I hope I'll find an inspiration and I'll be able to write interesting notes. Well this one is short, but it's better than nothing. Thank you for reading. Please feel free to correct me if you're sure I made a mistake. And I'll be very thankful for you if you kindly explain why I was wrong. Thanks!

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Day 9 (30 day Challenge)

This is the ninth day of the Challenge. I really want to improve my English writing skills, so I created this challenge for myself.

Today is the ninth day that I am writing on italki. Thank you to all who corrected my previous entries! You helped me a lot. I think I have started to see my progress, and I also have started to notice my mistakes. All of these helped me reach 1/3 of the way through my writing challenge.

But I have a problem. I have no idea what I should write in my next entries. :) I wrote about my day, learning English, this challenge and some mini articles for profound thinkers XD Anyway, I hope I'll find an inspiration and that I'll be able to write interesting notes.

Well, this one is short, but it's better than nothing. Thank you for reading. Please feel free to correct me if you're sure I made a mistake. And I'll be very thankful if you kindly explain why I was wrong. Thanks!

Wow! This is really good! There are some mistakes, and also some ways that you could improve if you wanted.

Reasons:

"I am writing" because you are currently writing, not in the past. Also, there is no "writed" in English, it is "wrote". "To write" is an irregular verb.

Thank you "to" all, rather than Thank you "for" all because it sounds more natural.

I corrected "notes" to "entries", as in notebook entries because it sounds more natural, but you can keep "notes" if you want.

I put "have started" because it makes more sense.

"But I have a problem" because it makes the problem more personal.

Need to have "through" because you are going through your writing challenge.

I removed "for you" because it is not necessary when saying thankful when thanking more than one person.

Day 9 (30 day Challenge)

This is the ninth day of the Challenge. I really want to improve my English writing skills, so I created this challenge for myself.

Today is the ninth day I writed wrote on italki. Thank you for to all who corrected my previous notes! You’ve helped me a lot. I think I’ve started to see my progress, also I’ve started to notice my mistakes. All of these this I’ve reached accomplished by only 1/3 of the way of into my writing challenge.

But there is a problem. I have no idea what I should write in my next notes :). So far I’ve wrote written about my day, learning English, this challenge and some mini articles for profound thinkers XD. Anyway, I hope I'll find an inspiration and I'll be able to write more interesting notes.

Well this one is short, but it's better than nothing. Thank you for reading. Please feel free to correct me if you're sure I made a mistake. And I'll be very thankful for you if you kindly explain why I was wrong. Thanks!

okay00, thank you :)

Your English is good - only a few small mistakes (which I won't point out, as Katy Rice has already done so) Keep it up! And good luck for the future :)

Leigh, thank you for the recommendations! :)

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