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Please help review and correct my writing "A great Sci-Fi movie - The Wandering Earth" A great Sci-Fi movie - The Wandering Earth This Monday, I have seen a Sci-Fi movie - The Wandering Earth, which is a blockbuster in the New Year movie season. It has been attentions attracted since the team announced its production because the original novel is written by Liu Cixin - the most successful and popular Chinese Sci-Fi writer in recent years. The movie tells a story about the Earth being pushed out of the solar system so as to save human civilization from being swallowed by the dying Sun. It happens in the future when the Sun enters the end of its life and is expanding to eat up all its planets. People have had to build thousands of enormous engines powered by nuclear energy on the Earth surface to drive the planet out of its orbit. Considering the massive size of the Earth, it's impossible to gain speed faster enough to escape by those engines. But fortunately, it was found out that Jupiter can be used as an accelerator to speed up the Earth. And the following plot is about how the process of acceleration is hard and dangerous and how the actors solve the difficult issues. The movie has an amazing story and gorgeous special effects. It's a great Sci-Fi movie.

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Please help review and correct my writing "A great Sci-Fi movie - The Wandering Earth"

A great Sci-Fi movie - The Wandering Earth

This Monday I saw a Sci-Fi movie, The Wandering Earth, which is a blockbuster in the New Year movie season. It has been attracting attention since the team announced its production because the original novel is written by Liu Cixin - the most successful and popular Chinese Sci-Fi writer in recent years.


The movie tells a story about the Earth being pushed out of the solar system so as to save human civilization from being swallowed by the dying Sun. It happens in the future when the Sun enters the end of its life and is expanding to eat up all its planets. People have had to build thousands of enormous engines powered by nuclear energy on the Earth‘s surface to drive the planet out of its orbit. Considering the massive size of the Earth, it's impossible to gain speed faster enough to escape with those engines. But fortunately, it was found out that Jupiter can be used as an accelerator to speed up the Earth. The rest of the plot is about how the process of acceleration is hard and dangerous and how the characters solve the difficult issues.

The movie has an amazing story and gorgeous special effects. It's a great Sci-Fi movie.

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