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Travelling
Today's topical is about "travelling".
I have traveled many times, however , the trip which left the deepest impression on me was when I traveled to Nanjing by myself in my sophomore year.
so I share two things about the trip to with you.
Comment: It might be just a dialectal thing, but "share with" sounds idiosyncratic when you're talking about sharing experiences or physical items, and "share to" is used when you share something on social media
the first one It is a delightful thing. I was sitting on a train to Nanjing, meeting a grandmother who was over 80 years old, I helped her taking luggages take luggage,then,she gave me a box of sugar to thank me.she told me a lot of things about her experience when she was young. I can feel her health 、kindhearted and lifeful, she is my role model in life.
Comment: "luggage" is an uncountable noun, so it doesn't have a plural form.
Comment: to help + (someone) + verb (in its base form).
* I helped my friend exercise.
* She helped me understand the theory better.
* We'll help you design your bedroom.
the second one is an irritating thing. when I was visiting " The Memorial Hall of the Victims in Nanjing Massacre by Japanese Invaders" a visitor hugged a statue with a smiling expression to take a picture. My God. could you imagine , the statue that of a mother who was is killed by Japanese Invaders ,but she hugs a baby who he is still alive ,crying in the arms of his mother, when they seen such a sad scene. why are they laughing. I can't understand.
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