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Talk about an important news event that happened recently in your country. Describe and explain why? The 40th anniversary congress of reform and opening up has been held recently and I think it’s important. To begin with, it will reminds Chinese to never forget where we started and keep exploring. After 40 years, China has achieved much progress but we shouldn’t deny the fact that we are now actually in a state very much like sailing to the midstream of a river or climbing halfway up a mountain, as the goings get tough, we must press ahead and there’s no turning back. Moreover, from the congress we know the targets we should fulfill in the next stage. For example, now China tends to improve its infrastructural level from “made in China” to “created in China”and to “intelligent manufacturing in China”. As a result, China now master the leading technology of small unmanned aerial vehicle, high-speed rail.

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The 40th anniversary congress of reform and opening up has been held recently and I think it’s important.

To begin with, it will reminds the Chinese to never forget where we started and keep exploring.

Comment: when verbs follow "will", they are not conjugated.

* John will play (not "plays")

* He will win (not "wins")


Comment: When referring to a nationality that ends in -ese (Chinese, Sudanese,  Japanese, etc.), the word "the" is placed before it.

* ...it will remind Canadians / it will remind Australians / it will remind Salvadorans

* ...it will remind the Sudanese / it will remind the Chinese / it will remind the Japanese


After 40 years, China has achieved much progress but we shouldn’t deny the fact that we are now actually in a state very much like sailing to the midstream of a river or climbing halfway up a mountain, as the goings get tough, we must press ahead and there’s no turning back.
Moreover, from the congress we know the targets we should fulfill in the next stage. For example, now China tends to improve its infrastructural level from “made in China” to “created in China”and to “intelligent manufacturing in China”. As a result, China now master the leading technology of small unmanned aerial vehicle, high-speed rail.


If you say, "China now is mastering the leading technology...", it means that they are in progress of doing so.

If you say, "China now masters the leading technology...", it means they are currently masters of it. 

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