English 1. About my city
Hello. I have decided to write here to practice my english skills. Thank you in advance for your correction!
I am from Krasnodar. It is just a common city in Russia, I think that nothing special there. It is close to Black Sea, so almost every year I go there with my family to take some rest. I like to swim, but also I like just lying on beach and take a tan like a lazy seal.
I dont think that I have some partucular special place in the city. But I like the road which I went every day when I used to go to the university. My university was placed in the middle of the city so I could enjoy the most beautiful views and buildings while I was going to the university. Also I met good friends and interesting people at university and sometimes we went home together thats why the way from home to university is special for me and recall warm remembers.
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English 1. About my city
Hello. I have decided to write here to practice my English skills. Thank you in advance for your correction!I am from Krasnodar. It is just a common city in Russia, I think that there is nothing special here (assuming you still live in that city). It is close to Black Sea, so almost every year I go there with my family on vacation. I like to swim, but I also like just lying on the beach and sunbathing like a lazy seal (seals sunbathe but don't get tan).
I don't think that there are any special places in Krasnodar. But (avoid starting sentences with "but" since it's a conjunction. "However" is more appropriate) However, I like the road which leads to went every day when I used to the university I used to go to. My university is located (it still exists, so we use present tense) in the middle of the city so I could enjoy the most beautiful views and buildings while there (avoid repeating the same word in a sentence). Also I made some good friends (they were not your friends when you met them, they became your friends in time) and met interesting people at university and sometimes we would go home together. That's why the way from home to university is special for me and evokes fond memories.
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why university "was placed"? may be better to say " This university is placed" and so on about university at Present Simple.
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