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I LOVE LONDON I visited London on 31st of December to celebrate New Year's Eve in a city that I always loved since I was a child. The first minutes I saw the big city I was shocked. Everything was different from my home, people were almost all blonde, beggars here and there, the houses were all so perfectly sharpened and a little bit old and classic. The streets were so elegant with a touch of extravagance. The sky was always grey but sometimes the weather was sunny and at the same time cold, fortunately it never rained the whole time I was there. The food was terrible and too expensive, much better the Italian food. I loved how London could be so different from street to street, it was like a melting pot, full of different people, tourists, artists, museums streets, parks... I was amazed by the fact that the underground was so well organized and it was always on time, it can take you wherever you want to, a lot different from my country where trains are always late and the underground is always jam packed. The spot that I liked most, was the view on the Tamigi from Waterloo bridge. When I was there I missed my home, but when I returned home I want to go back there. I think that London has the power of letting stranger fell in love with the city. London is so fascinating, so charming, so much everything... I wish I could go back there sooner or later.

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I visited London on the 31st of December because I wanted to celebrate New Year's Eve in a city I have always loved since I was a child. 

When I first saw how big the city was, I was shocked. Everything was different from my home. The people here were mostly blonde, and there were a few beggars here and there. The houses were all so perfectly sharp, giving off a bit of an old and classic feeling.
The streets were extremely elegant, and also had a touch of extravagance.
The sky was always grey..Sometimes, the weather was sunny, but it was still cold. Fortunately, it never rained the whole time I was there.
The food was terrible and too expensive. I like Italian food much better. 
I love how London can be so different from street to street. It is like a melting pot, full of different people, tourists, artists, museums streets, parks, and many other things.
I was amazed by the fact that the underground train system was so well organized, always on time and can take you wherever you want to go. It is very different from my country where trains are always late and jam packed. 
The spot that I liked most, was the view of the Tamigi from Waterloo bridge. 
When I was in London I missed home, but when I returned home I wanted to go back to London.
I think that London has the power of making strangers fell in love with the city. 
London is so fascinating, so charming, with so many different things going on.
I hope I can go back soon!

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PS: Sounds like you had a great time!

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I LOVE LONDON

I visited London on the 31st of December, to celebrate New Year's Eve in a city that I have always loved since I was a child.
The first minutes I saw the big city, I was shocked. Everything was different from my hometown. The people were nearly all blonde, there were beggars here and there, the houses were all so perfectly 1.shaped, and a little bit old and classic.
The streets were so elegant with a touch of extravagance.
The sky was always grey, but sometimes the weather was sunny and at the same time cold; fortunately it never rained the whole time I was there.
The food was terrible and too expensive, much better the Italian food!
I loved how London could be so different from one street to another, it was like a melting pot full of different people, tourists, artists, museums streets, and parks... 

I was amazed by the fact that the underground was so well organized and it was always on time. It can take you wherever you want to; a lot different from my country, where trains are always late and the underground is always jam packed.
The spot that I liked the most, was the view of the Thames from Waterloo bridge.
When I was there I missed my home, but when I returned home I wanted to go back there.
I think that London has the power of letting a stranger fell in love with the city.
London is so fascinating, so charming, so much everything...
I wish I could go back there 2. sooner or later. 


Great writing - lots of feeling about a lovely city!

1. Not sure what you mean by 'sharpened' - I put 'shaped' but maybe you meant something else!

2. Or you can say - 'sooner rather than later'

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