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‘You have to be strict to be a good parent’ Do you agree with that? Parents have the challenging task of raising their children in a society that has changed since then. For that reason, most of them believe that being strict parents is necessary these days. In my opinion, the best way to be a good parent is knowing how to teach with love. Firstly, sometimes parents must set rules so that kids learn to follow them and show respect for parent’s authority. However, parents have to try not to irritate children by giving them many rules. Secondly, teaching children to learn from their own mistakes is a value lesson. They could see how important is having a balance view about their mistakes and doing better things the next time. Finally, parents need to have a good communication with their children, especially when they are teens, to understand what they are feeling and thinking. In that way, they are strengthening their relationship between them. To sum up, it is not necessary to be so rude to educate children. The key is to teach by example and love. In that way, kids will notice the great effort that parents doing for them.

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‘You have to be strict to be a good parent’ Do you agree with that?

Parents have the challenging task of raising their children in a society that has changed in the last several years. For that reason, most of them believe that being strict parents is necessary these days. In my opinion, the best way to be a good parent is knowing how to teach with love.

Firstly, sometimes parents must set rules so that kids learn to follow them and show respect for their parent’s authority. However, parents have to try not to irritate children by giving them many rules.

Secondly, teaching children to learn from their own mistakes is a valuable lesson. They could see how important it is having a balanced view about their mistakes and doing better things the next time.

Finally, parents need to have a good communication with their children, especially when they are teens.  To try to understand what they are feeling and thinking. In that way, they are strengthening their relationship with them.

To sum up, it is not necessary to be so strict to educate children. The key is to teach by example and love. In that way, kids will notice the great effort that parents doing for them.


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‘You have to be strict to be a good parent’ Do you agree with that?

Parents have the challenging task of raising their children in a society whose views on parenting have changed. that has changed since then. For that reason, most of believe that being strict parents is necessary these days.  Most parents continue to believe and practice a very strict parenting style.  In my opinion, the best way to be a good parent is knowing how to teach with love.

Firstly, sometimes parents must set rules so that kids learn to follow them and by doing so learn show respect for parent’s  parental authority. However, parents have to try must be careful not to frustrate irritate their children by giving them too many rules.

Secondly, teaching children to learn from their own mistakes is a value valuable lesson. They begin to see mistakes as necessary tools for learning how to do better next time.  They could see how important is having a balance view about their mistakes and doing better things the next time.

Finally, parents need to have a good communication with their children, especially during the teenage years in order when they are teens, to understand what their kids they are feeling and thinking. In that way, they will strengthen their relationship with them.are strengthening their relationship with between them.

In summary, To sum up, an overly authoritarian approach to parenting is not necessary in order to educate children. it is not necessary to be so rude to educate children. The key is to teach by example and with love. In that way, kids will develop a better appreciation of all the things their parents have done for them.  notice the great effort that parents doing for them.

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