A story lesson 22

1. When Kate was driving home in her car, her friend dropped her a line.

Kate stopped by to drink coffee and read the note .

2. Kate stopped to drink coffee and then read the note.

The note was incomprehensible abbreviations. (No correction needed)

She asked the friend was to stand for this abbreviation.

3. She asked her friend what did the abbreviations stand for.

The friend answered that he stand a chance to buy tickets for the famous singer ‘s concert, whom Kate look up to.

4. The friend answered that he had a chance to buy tickets for a famous singer's concert, whom Kate was a fan of.

The next day at lunch Kate came across with her friend Mary into a shop.

5. The next day at lunch, Kate came across her friend Mary at a shop.

Mary said Kate that many times she looked on at the concert of this singer and looked down on Kate.

6. Mary told Kate that she saw this singer in concert several of times. (I don't know what you are trying to say when you wrote "and looked down on Kate".)

Lunch break ended and Kate took off their meet.

7. The lunch break ended and Kate left.

Her watch keep time 2 o’cloclean p.m.

8. She looked at her watch and saw that it was 2:00 PM.

Kate took pains in her job. (I'm not sure what you are trying to say with this sentence.)

In the evening on the way home Kate pull off her car and it seemed from the friend’s suggestion to go to the concert.

9. In the evening on the way home, Kate, based on her friend's suggestion, decided to make a detour and go to the concert.