artificial intelligence Part I
Every new scientific technology is a double-edged sword. Therefore, two views in opposite ways are reasonable due to the effects of AI on their lives positively and negatively. I am going to elaborate my view in the field of AI.
On the one hand, the lower price goods and services provided by the AI are good for improving the life. The 8 hours work time will be a reality in China and most importantly, there is no harm to the prosperity of economy. People could enjoy the life and do more creative works. As a consequence, the science and the art will boom. Maybe someday utopia will not be an imaginary place.
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artificial intelligence Part I
Every new scientific technology is a double-edged sword. Therefore, it makes sense to view* two views in opposite ways are reasonable due to the effects of AI on their our lives in opposite ways, both positively and negatively. I am going to elaborate my view in of the field of AI.On the one hand, the lower price goods and services provided by the AI are good for improving the life. The 8 hours work time day** will be a reality in China and most importantly, there is no it will unlikely harm to the prosperity of economy. People could enjoy the life and do more creative works.*** As a consequence, the science and the art will boom****. Maybe someday utopia will not be an imaginary place.
Elizabeth, This is a great essay. Very clearly and intelligently written. I look forward to part two.
* I switched around the first sentence to make it flow in more natural English. I also changed "are reasonable" to "it makes sense to view". The phrase "it makes sense" is informal, but it is widely used. More formal ways to say this are "is is reasonable" or "it is logical". I hope this is appropriate to the meaning you intended.
** "The eight-hour work-day" is natural. But we would more commonly say "the 40-hour work-week." What is the current work-week in China?
*** Alternate sentence: "People would have the opportunity to enjoy their lives more, and take part in more creative activities."
**** Alternate sentence: "As a result, arts and sciences will have the potential to bloom" ("bloom" vs. "boom" both suggest great growth, but "bloom" is more organic).
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