Today
I met my nephews and ate sushi for dinner today.
After the dinner, we played UNO with a penalty.(a game loser has to play)
I lose two times and I had to do something funny! I was so embarrassed but enjoy the games! My nephews enjoyed and laughed my playing, so I was really happy! That’s my today’s story! Thank you!
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Today
I met my nephews and ate sushi for dinner today.After the dinner, we played UNO with a penalty (a game the loser has to play).
I lost two times and I had to do something funny! I was so embarrassed but still enjoyed the game! My nephews enjoyed it too and they laughed at my playing, so I was really happy! That’s my today’s story! Thank you!
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Today
I met my nephews and ate sushi for dinner today.After the dinner, we played UNO with a penalty.(a game loser has to play)
I lose two times and I had to do something funny! I was so embarrassed but enjoy I enjoiyed the games! My nephews enjoyed and laughed my playing, so I was really happy! That’s my today’s story! Thank you!
Good work!! Thank you for sharing your day!
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Thank you! I will use “ twice” next time!
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using "twice" instead of "two times" is often better and more elegant (at least in US english that I hear everyday)
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I lose two times -> I lost two times
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I lost twice
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