Sleep
My body is need 8 hours sleep.Sleep at night is better then sleep at day.
Sleep is comfortable for the body.
When sleeping dreams come to be annoying or beautiful.
Sleep is necessary for healthy life.
At least 6 hour of sleep with in a day is mandatory for healthy life.
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My body is need needs 8 hours sleep. Sleeping at night is better than sleeping at during the day. Sleep is comfortable for the body. When sleeping, dreams come to and can be annoying or beautiful. Sleep is necessary for a healthy life. At least 6 hour of sleep within a day is mandatory for healthy life.
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Sleep
My body is needs 8 hours sleep.Sleeping at night is better then sleeping at during the day .Sleeping is comfortable for the body.
When while sleeping dreams come.it can to be annoying or beautiful.
Sleep is necessary for a healthy life.
At least a 6 hour of sleep with in a day is mandatory for healthy life.
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Sleep
My body is need needs 8 hours of sleep.(there is no such a grammatical form as "is need" , need/needs(Present Indefinite). Continuous form "is needing" wouldn't work since "need" is a non-continuous verb)Sleep is comfortable for the body. (definite article is unnecessary if you wanted to make a general statement, but since you've mentioned "your body", would do)
When I am sleeping, dreams come to be annoying or beautiful.
Sleep is necessary for a healthy life.
At least 6 hours (Plural)of sleep within a day is mandatory for a healthy life.
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