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Money after the retirement age It’s the second day of the coldest weather of the year. According to a weather forecast, it will also be cold tomorrow and may snow in the Tokyo area because of the cold nap sitting on northeast Japan. 今年一番の寒さの2日目。天気予報によると、寒気団が明日まで日本上空に居座るため、明日も寒く、もしかしたら雪も降るかもしれないらしい。 On such a freezing afternoon, I stayed at home and spent hours reading books. A book I started reading today, Money after Retirement Age, has made me think a lot about the rest of my senior life. I guess that I will be considering more about how to cope with harsh realities. こんな日は家でゆっくりと過ごし、読書を楽しんだ。今日から読み始めた「定年後のお金」には多くのことを考えさせられている。読み終わる頃にはこの厳しい現実にどう対応していくかをもっと深く考えているだろうな。

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Money after the retirement age

It’s the second day of the coldest weather of the year (It’s the second coldest day of the year). According to a weather forecast, it will also be cold tomorrow and may snow in the Tokyo area because of the cold nap air mass sitting covering on Northeast Japan.
今年一番の寒さの2日目。天気予報によると、寒気団が明日まで日本上空に居座るため、明日も寒く、もしかしたら雪も降るかもしれないらしい。

On such a freezing afternoon, I stayed at home and spent hours reading books. A book I started reading today, Money after Retirement Age, has made me think a lot about the rest of my senior life. I guess that I will be considering thinking more about of how to cope with harsh realities.
こんな日は家でゆっくりと過ごし、読書を楽しんだ。今日から読み始めた「定年後のお金」には多くのことを考えさせられている。読み終わる頃にはこの厳しい現実にどう対応していくかをもっと深く考えているだろうな。

Very wise thoughts, Toru! This whole situation in the world has also made me think more about my finances and future.
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Money after the retirement age

It’s the second day of the coldest weather of the year. According to a weather forecast, it will also be cold tomorrow and may snow in the Tokyo area because of the cold nap spell sitting on northeast Japan.
今年一番の寒さの2日目。天気予報によると、寒気団が明日まで日本上空に居座るため、明日も寒く、もしかしたら雪も降るかもしれないらしい。

On such a freezing afternoon, I stayed at home and spent hours reading books. A book I started reading today, Money after Retirement Age, has made me think a lot about the rest of my senior life. I guess that I will be considering more about how to cope with harsh realities.
こんな日は家でゆっくりと過ごし、読書を楽しんだ。今日から読み始めた「定年後のお金」には多くのことを考えさせられている。読み終わる頃にはこの厳しい現実にどう対応していくかをもっと深く考えているだろうな。

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Your English is great! The only thing to look at is dependent prepositions. "Consider" means "think about", so we don't use a preposition because it would be like saying "think about about".

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