The gain and loss in the Chinese new year holiday 2/10/2019
This spring festival , I have 8 days holiday. I gained much in the festival, I practiced the driving about more than 100 kilometres and I can drive without the guider succussfully.
I had a reunion with my family and enjoy the time to chat with them.
I ate the very delicious food brought from my hometown, it's the taste of my childhood.
I also lost something , I have not read any book during the holiday upon my plan.
I have not gone to the gym for exercise, that make me 2 kilogramm heavier now.
Tomorrow I will back to work ,I would like to be a refresh man appeare in people the sight.
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The gain and loss of this Chinese New Year holiday 2/10/2019
This spring festival, I have had 8 days holiday. I gained a lot during festival: I practiced the driving for about/more than （你只能用一个，“about”可以，“more than”也可以，但是两个一起用不客气） 100 kilometres and now I can drive without the guide successfully.I had a reunion with my family and enjoyed having the time to chat with them.
I ate the very delicious food brought from my hometown, it's the taste of my childhood.
I also lost something; I have not read any books during the holiday upon my plan. (我不懂用“upon my plan”你想表达什么意思）
I have not gone to the gym to exercise, so I am 2 kilograms heavier now. (比较自然的说法是“so I have gained 2 kilograms）
Tomorrow I will back to work, where I would like to be seen by other people as having been refreshed.
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The gain and loss in the Chinese new year holiday 2/10/2019
This spring festival, I have 8 days of holiday. I gained much in the festival, I got to practice driving about 100 kilometres and I can now successfully drive without the guider.I had a reunion with my family and enjoyed the time I got to chat with them.
I ate some very delicious food brought from my hometown, it reminded me of my childhood.
I also lost something, I have not read any book during the holiday like I plannned to.
I have not gone to the gym for exercise, that makes me 2 kilograms heavier now.
Tomorrow I will back to work ,I would like appear like a refreshed man when I return
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