Bony and Lily met each other after ages
I am going to write a story using these new words and phrases which I put together roudumly: go straight to sleep, for ages, shut in the wind, deduction, inside the school, journey, trip.
Bony and Lily haven't seen each other for ages. They met today in a funny situation in the train station. Bony got a deduction of her salary today. Her boss said the projects didn't go well last year and everyone should get a deduction from the salary. Bony has five children and all of them are still inside the school. And they didn't take a weekend trip for a long time. Today Bony saw Lily was asking a young stuff of a bread store in the train station about a toilet, when Bony was on her journey to go back home like usually. Lily and the stuff was outside the store when Lily was asking. Unfortnately (for the stuff), at that time the door shut in the wind but the stuff didn't have the key in his pocket. ... After a long funny story they went straight to bed when they arrived Bony's house together.
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Bony and Lily met each other after ages
I am going to write a story using these new words and phrases which I put togetherBony and Lily haven't seen each other for ages. They met today in a funny situation in the train station. Bony got a reduction of her salary today. Her boss said the projects didn't go well last year and everyone should get a reduction from the salary. Bony has five children and all of them are still in school. And they didn't take a weekend trip for a long time. Today Bony saw Lily was asking a young stuff of a bread store in the train station about a toilet, when Bony was on her journey to go back home as usual.
Stuff - you are not using this word correctly and I cannot determine what you mean. You may be using 'stuff' to represent a person, but that is not correct. As a noun, Stuff typically means a collection of non-specific items.
Do not take any of my stuff out of my room.
Please give me my stuff.
I threw away the stuff I no longer need.
I hope this helps!
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"Deduction" from a paycheck is to pay for pre-agreed things like taxes, health care, and retirement savings. If you do something wrong and they take money from your paycheck for it that is "docking your pay". "In school" can mean attending/enrolled in school *or* physically inside the school. "Inside the school" always means physically inside the school.
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