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Suspiria
I watched Suspiria, which is a remake one.This film is not my usual taste I usually watch, but I was curious.
It was beyond description /words.
I was confused and freaked out.
The music was composed by Thom York’s. It was great and scary.
I think I’ll be dreaming about this film😰 .
[Oh wow! The film sounds intense - I may check it out.
Remember to use a verb in each sentence. E.g. 'The music was composed by...']
Suspiria
I watched the remake of the movie Suspiria which is remake one.This film is not my taste I usually watch*, but I’m I was curious.**
It was beyond description.
I was confused and freaked out.
The music composed by Thom York’s is great*** and scared scary.
I think I’ll be dreamingbe dreaming have nightmares about this film😰
Wow, I didn't know they made a remake. I saw the original (1977) version, and I thought it was creepy and disturbing. You watch a lot of movies, don't you?
* "This film is not my taste I usually watch" - this doesn't sound natural. You can say "This film really wasn't my taste." But I think the most natural way is ""This isn't the kind of film I normally enjoy . . "
** "I'm curious" - The meaning is unclear. Do you mean "I watched the movie because I was curious about it" or do you mean "I have a curious personality (好奇心旺盛な性格) and I watched it because of that"? "I'm curious" means 私は好奇心旺盛な性格. "I was curious" means その映画に興味がありました。
*** "great and scary" - "Great" implies that you liked the movie. But what you wrote . . . it sounds like you didn't like it. We use "great" the way Japanese uses 素晴らしい or すごい. If you meant that the music was すごく怖いです then it would be better to say "the music composed by Thom York was really scary."
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