the effect of robot that takes the place of human beings in industry s well as people's daily lives.
There are some great changes in society when more and more robots take the place of human beings in industry as well as people's daily lives.
Some feel fantastic.The others may feel bad. Every scientific technology will be an double-edged sword. As for individual, More convenience and the lower price of goods can be good for them, But for some individuals in some industry, It will be a disaster for them when they happen to lose jobs due to the application of robots in their industry. As for each country, Once she sizes the chance of robots, The possibility of her prosperity will enlarge and the felicity of her people will increase. Vice versa. but in every country, there is the possibility of unrest because of the mass unemployment.
Once upon a time for the electricity, nowadays for the robot, we all are fraught with anxiety because the unknown.
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The effect of robots that taking the place of human beings in industries as well as people's daily lives.
There are some great changes that took place in society when more and more, robots began to take the place of human beings in industries and people's daily lives.Some people feel fantastic about these changes.The Others may feel bad. Every new scientific technology (也可以说“Every new technological development“）will be an double-edged sword. As for individuals On an individual scale （其实“As for individuals“这么说不是错的，但是我觉得用“On an individual scale“不仅是个比较高级的说法，而且重复一个说法”As for“听起来不太自然), the increased convenience and the lower price of goods may be good for them, but for some individuals in some industries, it will be a disaster for them if they happen to lose their jobs due to the introduction of robots into their industry. As for each country, once they seize the opportunity of robots this new technology （这个语法没错，只是有点不自然), the possibility of her prosperity and the happiness levels of their people will increase. Vice versa, but in every country, there is also the possibility of unrest, because of the sudden increase in unemployment.
Previously, it was the electricity, but now, it is robots. We all are fraught with anxiety to face the unknown.
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The effect of robots that taking the place of human beings in the workforce, industry as well as people's daily lives.
There are some great changes that result in society when more and more robots take the place of human beings in industries, as well as people's daily lives.Some feel are fantastic, The others may feel be bad. Every scientific technology will be an double-edged sword. As for individuals, more convenience and the for lower price of goods can be good for them. But However, for some individuals working in some industries, it will be a disaster for them when they happen to lose their jobs due to the application introduction of robots in their industry. As for each country, once she sizes seizes upon the chance of using robots, the possibility of her prosperity will enlarge and the felicity of her people will increase [this sentence makes sense but is worded in an odd way]Vice versa (this is not the correct use of this expression) On the other hand, but in every country, there is faces the possibility of unrest because of the mass unemployment.
Once upon a time for Back in the day, we had similar thoughts concerning electricity, nowadays for the it's robots. We all are fraught with anxiety because of the unknown.
[You're totally right! There is a big dilemma here.
Instead of using the word 'robots' consider also using 'automation' or 'AI' = Artifical Intelligence.]
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