sara's notebook entry: Jun 30, 2010
TODAY Amy and i plan an activity of the Huan Le Gu in Shanghai. So we need more friends to play with us. But...
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I have no opinion worth mentioning, but the Shanghai Happy Valley travel plan is very attractive...
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哈哈哈哈！
You need more practice in written English.
So do I.
Hope some warm-harted native English speaker can correct this article.
Thanks a lot.
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