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Technology makes a better place Due to the rapid development of technology, our lives have changed a lot. Various means of transport have accelerated our travels, and modernized buildings have become new symbols of cities. However, pollution in industrialized areas is now a serious threat to our health. Despite this, from my point of view, the advantages of new technology far outweigh its drawbacks. For one thing, technology has changed our lifestyles thoroughly. Take Internet, the most efficient way of study and entertainment, as an example. We can get whatever we desire through search engine and enjoy the most popular films and games with our familie and friends. Though e-commerce, products with high qualities are easy to get with an acceptable price. Besides, modern facilities such as shopping mall are the integration of modern technology, which provide an one-stop experiences for city dwellers. For another, although there are many issues concerning environment, many of these are induced by underdeveloped technology that emits wastes without control. For this reason, we should concentrate on improving the existing procedures in order to minimize the negative effects of industry. Only in this way can we obtain the balance between development and protection. In conclusion, technology has evolved our lives tremendously, and we should always try to get more out of it.

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Technology makes a better place

Due to the rapid development of technology, our lives have changed a lot. Various means of transport have accelerated our travels, and modernized buildings have become new symbols of cities. However, pollution in the industrialized areas is now a serious threat to our health. Despite this, from my point of view, the advantages of new technologies far outweigh their drawbacks.
For one thing, technology has changed our lifestyles thoroughly. Take the Internet, the most efficient way of study and entertainment, as an example. We can get whatever we desire through a search engine and enjoy the most popular films and games with our family and friends. Though e-commerce, products of high quality are easy to get for affordable prices. Besides, modern facilities such as shopping malls are the integration of modern technology, which provide a one-stop experience for city dwellers.
Although there are many issues concerning the environment, many of these are induced by underdeveloped technology that emits pollution without control. For this reason, we should concentrate on improving the existing procedures in order to minimize the negative effects of industry. Only in this way can we obtain the balance between development and protection.
In conclusion, technology has evolved our lives tremendously, and we should always try to get more out of it.

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