strange weather

God! Oh !it's thundering!!

My god, it's thundering!

In the daytime ~it has big sun ~but now~~it is thundering~~

During the day, it was sunny, but now it is thundering.

i praying it don't power cut~if that~it'll so drak in the night~tonight,home I personal ~ I'll too afraid!!!!

I'm praying there won't be a power failure. If that happens, it will get so dark that I will be afraid of being home alone.

Strange weather

God! it's thundering! it had big sun In the daytime, but now it is thundering. I praying to god  for power is not off. otherwise it'll so drak in the night that I'll be rather afraid and lonely staying home.

strange weather

God!!it's thundering!!In the daytime ~it has big sun(最好说成The large sun was in the sky during the daytime我不确定你那里是晚上还是白天在打雷。) ~but now~~it is thundering~~i praying it don't power cut（power cut是一个名词词组，不能接在don't之后，可以写成I pray the power won't be out of service）~if that~it'll be so dark in the night~tonight I'll be at home alone~ I'll be afraid!!!

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Strange weather

Oh my god! it's thundering. The sun has been shining all day, but now it's thundering. I'm praying that the power is not cut. If that happens, it would be so dark. Tonight I will be alone at home and I would feel very afraid.