Today
Today, I went to my friend's home with my mom. My mom brought roasted sweet potatoes. And my friend's mom prepared pancakes and tea. They were so delicious!
After that, my friend and I played board games. Oh! She was so good at them. I couldn't win, but I still enjoyed them. It's so sad that I can hardly hang out with her from this March.
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Today
Today, I went to my friend's home with my mom. My mom brought roasted sweet potatoes. And and my friend's mom prepared pancakes and tea. They were so delicious! After that, my friend and I played board games.Oh! She was so good at them. I couldn't win, but I still enjoyed them. It's so sad that I can hardly hang out with her after March.
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Almost perfect! The only small change is that technically a sentence should not start with 'And' but that doesn't matter for casual writing.
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