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I would like to upload on my Instagram. Hi everyone, would you mind checking my sentence? 1) Love the magnificent cityscape of Sydney, and people are sociable and thoughtful, I recommended everyone to visit here for traveling. However it's about time I came back to Japan, so let's make the most of the time I have left. 2) Hi everyone, I decided to come back to Japan next week then I'm going to work in Tokyo from March as a recruitment consultant. It's a huge challenge for me, hopefully everything is going to move forward. In fact, I had a lot of great and hard experience and met amazing people in Cebu and Sydney, hope we'll meet again, thank you for everyone.

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I would like to upload a photo on my Instagram.

Hi everyone, would you mind checking my sentence?

1) Love the magnificent cityscape of Sydney;  people are sociable and thoughtful - I highly recommend touring this spot.  Unfortunately, it's about time I went back to Japan, so I'll make the most of the time I have left.

2) Hi everyone, I decided to come back to Japan next week then I'm going to work in Tokyo from March onward as a recruitment consultant. It's a huge challenge for me, Hopefully, everything is going to move smoothly. I had a lot of both great and tough experiences here, and met amazing people in Cebu and Sydney. I hope we'll meet again. Thank you everyone.
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I would like to upload on my Instagram.

Hi everyone, would you mind checking my sentence?

1) Love the magnificent cityscape of Sydney, and people are sociable and thoughtful, I recommended everyone to visit here for traveling. However it's about time I came back return to Japan, so let's make the most of the time I have left.

2) Hi everyone, I decided to come back return to Japan next week then I'm going to work in Tokyo from March as a recruitment consultant. It's a huge challenge for me, hopefully everything is going to move forward. In fact, I had a lot of great and hard challenging experiences and met amazing people in Cebu and Sydney, hope we'll meet again, thank you for to everyone. (thank you for everything?)

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